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How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate Cohesion :

1. Develop a paragraph around a major idea. Express this idea in the topic sentence.
2. Make the relationship between the main idea of the paragraph and the thesis of the paper clear. Don’t assume that the reader will “get it.” Spell it out for him/her.
3. Support the main idea of the paragraph with details.
4. Create separate paragraphs for those details that explore your topic from different perspectives.
5. Eliminate sentences that do not support the main idea. Alternately, you may revise the main idea to include those sentences.

Cohesion means sticking together. If your group of friends heads to the lunchroom as a team and sits all together, you're demonstrating strong cohesion.

Cohesion is a word that comes to us through physics, where cohesion describes particles that are the same and tend to stick together — water molecules, for example. Outside of physics, cohesion describes unity among parts, and is something to be sought after. A team that has good cohesion is often a team that wins.

The differences of  “Coherence” and “Cohesion”

Cohesion and coherence are terms used in discourse analysis and text linguistics to describe the properties of written texts.

A text may be cohesive without necessarily being coherent: Cohesion does not spawn coherence. Cohesion is determined by lexically and grammatically overt intersentential relationships, whereas coherence is based on semantic relationships.

All About Me (Asmitha)

My name is Asmitha Ridha Cindyani. You can call me Asmitha. I live in Unit 1 Tulang Bawang. I am stay in My boarding house at Teladan alley, 15 A Metro.  => Topic Setence

            I have two big black eyes, slightly aquiline nose, thick lips, chubby cheeks which made my round face looks so cute. My wavy black hair is long and very smooth. My skin is olive that make me look shiny. I loves to be captured, pose and always looks good on the camera.

The most characteristic about me is I am friendly but some people say that me arrogant, like cleanliness, very kind. My body is fat and tall.

My hobby is travelling, reading, shopping and of course sleeping. I like travelling baecause I like visited many place and take a picture in there but I very like travelling inthe bveach because can make me enjoy, happy and forgotten my problem.Ilike reading because can increase my knowledge and know about everything. And shopping, I think every women like shopping, yeah,,,,shopping is very happy. In my free time I often used to sleep,especialy take a nap in the afternoon. => Supporting Sentence

I am enjoy doing My activity  in my free time is browsing or open my account facebook. It’s very make me enjoy. I often use my free time to travelling with my friends. Thats all about me. How about you? => Concluding Sentence

Red: Identification

Green: Description

Blue: Conclution